Flamingos

into blue skies

   pink wings take flight

         ripples on the pond

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/25/2013 12:56:00 AM
I like when people write haiku in this fashion (cause and affect, where the reader is left to make the connection)... the image you paint feels very alive and happening as if I was really there... you my friend GET haiku. Lovely work :)
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Date: 2/22/2013 6:45:00 PM
Francine, yours is a truly well written haiku. Echoing carrie's remarks. Congrats to you.
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Date: 2/22/2013 9:29:00 AM
I would place this much higher! (a true haiku....not a continuation of a sentence)....... great form, Francine, and wonderful images!
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Date: 2/21/2013 7:19:00 PM
Congrats Francine ....Seren
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Date: 2/21/2013 6:15:00 PM
Francine,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA
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Date: 2/21/2013 1:53:00 PM
I could just see the scene..It must have been pretty..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara
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Date: 2/20/2013 10:08:00 PM
Reading this reminded me of some Florida scenery. Walt Disney World in Orlando has a large population of these pink birds. Good way to describe them here.
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Date: 2/18/2013 10:22:00 PM
Another visually pleasing piece.
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Date: 2/18/2013 4:36:00 PM
An amazing sight to see, Francine! Thanks for the journey to this warm scenery! Luv Annalise
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Date: 2/18/2013 4:18:00 PM
Have yet to see
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Date: 2/18/2013 3:36:00 PM
Beautiful picture you painted from words. Good luck in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
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