Flamingos

into blue skies pink wings take flight ripples on the pond

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/25/2013 12:56:00 AM

I like when people write haiku in this fashion (cause and affect, where the reader is left to make the connection)... the image you paint feels very alive and happening as if I was really there... you my friend GET haiku. Lovely work :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2013 6:45:00 PM

Francine, yours is a truly well written haiku. Echoing carrie's remarks. Congrats to you.

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/22/2013 9:29:00 AM

I would place this much higher! (a true haiku....not a continuation of a sentence)....... great form, Francine, and wonderful images!

Seren Roberts

Date: 2/21/2013 7:19:00 PM

Congrats Francine ....Seren

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2013 6:15:00 PM

Francine,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2013 1:53:00 PM

I could just see the scene..It must have been pretty..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/20/2013 10:08:00 PM

Reading this reminded me of some Florida scenery. Walt Disney World in Orlando has a large population of these pink birds. Good way to describe them here.