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Five Golden Rings

Two different lives, from different worlds, were meant to be as one He became her guiding star, and she became his shining sun Once they had been strangers, but love brought them together He had never fathered children, but quadruplets called her Mother He brought along a gentle love, and was sure enough to give it She brought along a crazy life, and taught him how to live it! The day arrived, when they would wed, excitement filled the air On the fifth Yule day, they said their vows, and end to end were there...... The children, four, came through the door, to crowd the alter floor He pulled 5 rings, a diamond gleamed, upon her finger worn And 4 small rings, upon 4 chains, around their necks, he swore to love them all, and make them whole, and give them all he owned 5 Yuletide Days, 5 gifts he gave,.... 5 times the love, ...and more __________________________________________ For Shadow's Contest: 12/3/13

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Date: 12/10/2013 5:58:00 AM
WOW!GL
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Date: 12/8/2013 9:17:00 PM
Way to go with the contest. Congrats on your fine win in the contest.
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Date: 12/8/2013 7:19:00 AM
Wow! This so beautiful poem my dear friend Carrie! So love it. Thank u so much for sharing and my biggest hearty congratulations on your super win! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/7/2013 9:26:00 AM
The flow of your poem... and how you write this is TREMENDOUS! Congratulations on the win!
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Date: 12/7/2013 8:09:00 AM
Hello Carrie, A very good poem. Nice win....Roger
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Date: 12/7/2013 12:19:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Carrie
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Date: 12/6/2013 10:54:00 PM
Not surprised to see this one near the top. Congrats my personal favorite.
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Date: 12/6/2013 6:39:00 PM
Loving poem, Carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/6/2013 5:36:00 PM
Hi Carrie congrats on 2nd place a lovely poem ty for entering Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 12/5/2013 7:47:00 PM
Beyond beautiful! The best Christmas wedding poem I have read so far. Clap clap clap a standing ovation. 7777777 favorite.
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Date: 12/5/2013 9:46:00 AM
Absoultely gorgeous!!! You deciphered the meaning of the title with such grace & clarity.
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Date: 12/4/2013 3:08:00 AM
Good one carrie. Love is so divine.Love changes people, provided the will to live.(: ) Jenish.
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