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Below is the poem entitled First Love which was written by poet Elaine George. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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First Love

Returning home again after many years away
I find our secret path along the Fundy Bay
That happy place where long ago we played
Where all our dreams and promises were made

Once again I lie down where daises grow
In fields above the banks where salt winds blow
Golden memories rush through my hungry soul
Returning pieces of my heart lost long ago

I close my eyes recalling all the things we did
Just the way they were when we were kids
And I know without a doubt that you are here
As your love for me falls from my eyes in tears

We lie like angels looking up at clouds of cream
As we watch them take the shape of all our dreams
We laugh so hard at all the things we do and say
To us life is just a stage a place to laugh and play

We find the trail that takes us down to meet the ocean
Where we swim in waves of jubilant emotions
Then we walk along the shore together hand-in-hand
And we write our love forever in the sand


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Author:  Elaine George
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  1. Date: 5/28/2014 9:01:00 AM
    Elaine Such a passionate and sweet write. The love and care you feel is portrayed in such a charming and beautiful way. Thank you for the nice comment on my Fairy Tale Love poem.

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    Date: 5/28/2014 9:06:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for reading my poem and for your verry kind comments, Robin. Lainie
  1. Date: 3/1/2013 7:13:00 AM
    just stopping by, and found your poem .. so nice.

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 11:37:00 PM
    ELINE, stopping by to read a couple of poems. CONGRATULATIONS!! :-) with your featured poem of the week. Goodnight~ LUV~ PD

  1. Date: 11/9/2010 4:00:00 PM
    Lainie, there is so much to love about this winning poem! where do I begin?!...."as your love for me falls from my eyes in tears" whoa!!! wonderful!!!surely the great poets have visited this theme of yours, and this beauty ranks at the pinnacle in my book! each stanza is filled with incredible beauty! BRAVO! MY FRIEND! A MASTERPIECE! jimbo

  1. Date: 5/2/2010 2:33:00 PM
    Too long since last you posted one of your beautiful write here at the Soup, Lainie ... hope you return soon ... smile ... I love this one !!

  1. Date: 4/14/2010 12:18:00 PM
    Nice one, enjoyed the read .P.D.

  1. Date: 4/9/2010 6:59:00 PM
    Lainie, This beautiful poem in not only romantic but is so well written that it paints a picture of memories that may be shared by the reader in a most intimate way. You write wonderfully in rhyme and I found this poem enchanting! Into my fav's. Love, Connie

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 2:43:00 PM
    wow this is a beautiful poem and a great story! i am glad i read this one, filled with brilliant imagery. i loved how you described life as a stage, i have many times felt that our lives are all just theater because most of the things we do dont matter when it comes to the big picture. good write1 jo

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 11:54:00 AM
    Love has truly filled the air this day on the Soup... it must be the beautiful weather.. its 91 degrees today but going to change in a few days...enjoying a day at the beach while it lasts... so so so so happy to see u back Lainie.. hope your recovery is going well and much inspiration has filled u during this time ...u have been greatly missed my friend... good to have u return..to WOW us with your verses..luv.. Linda-Marie..

  1. Date: 4/7/2010 6:34:00 AM
    Very romantic.

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 7:29:00 PM
    soup mail>>>>>

  1. Date: 3/20/2010 12:10:00 PM
    This is just a nice feeling poem as well, memories of being young. Nice memories. Thank you.

  1. Date: 3/15/2010 5:57:00 AM
    enjoyed reading sounds naughty

  1. Date: 3/7/2010 12:57:00 PM
    Beautiful poetry Elaine. I was thinking about you and wondering where you have been. I thought I'd stop by and say I miss you. (This poem brought tears to my eyes...young love.) God be with you. Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 3/7/2010 9:09:00 AM
    The heavy imagery given to me in the writing was epic. The sudden rush of emotions reminded me of my first love, it wasn't as romantic or moving, yet a nice memory to relive. Beautiful. Love, Sami.

  1. Date: 2/28/2010 3:16:00 PM
    Your words moved my heart, very nice!

  1. Date: 2/27/2010 1:45:00 PM
    That first love, so special, so warm and tender. this was a very touching and heart warming poem.

  1. Date: 2/21/2010 10:01:00 AM
    beautiful poem: can feel the serenity

  1. Date: 2/20/2010 10:18:00 AM
    Elaine. I have pictures of empty violin cases and of violins. Could you superimpose? If so, I'll send them to you. BIG LOVE, daver

  1. Date: 2/18/2010 11:46:00 AM
    This is so beautiful, Lainie, and I wanted to stop by and say we miss you here. Hope all is going well for you. Love, Carolyn

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