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First Love

As the monsoon rains fall heavily on the ground,
I sit by the window pane wishing you were around.

The thunder strikes and I run to hide away
In search of your loving arms, where I long to stay.

I go back to that place where we first met,
The quaint chapel by the meadows, our eyes set.
Our tender hearts: innocent, youthful and frail
Together on love’s current we set sail.

Against what they say we took our every chance
But stumbled upon our childish games and youthful arrogance.
Somewhere in the journey we both lost our way
And “I love you” were just meaningless words we say.

There were many beautiful things we learned together
As we basked in sunlight and battled stormy weather.
Now, all that is left to hold on to are memories of you.
The sound of your voice that faintly says your love is true.

The lightning flashes and slowly I open my eyes
It was all but a dream, from my bed I rise.

I sit by the window pane wishing you were around,
As the monsoon rains fall heavily on the ground.

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  1. Date: 9/28/2009 4:23:00 PM
    Just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 4:19:00 AM
    Congrats 2u, your poem making it through to the finals, bravo!

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 5:32:00 AM
    Great poem Bianca. :) Loved the beginning and end. Congratulations as well... :p - Navs

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 2:47:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 12:33:00 PM
    Andrea, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James

  1. Date: 8/6/2009 6:43:00 PM
    Good stuff! read this out loud.... it flows as silk. Got to read more of you fellow Poet. Enjoy your night!

  1. Date: 8/6/2009 6:32:00 PM
    Loved how the beginning and the end mirrored. Light & Love and welcome

  1. Date: 7/22/2009 7:44:00 PM
    Hey Andy. I love this. By far your best work. I miss you. :)

  1. Date: 6/25/2009 11:11:00 AM
    Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/25/2009 11:00:00 AM
    Congratulations on the featuring of "First Love", Andrea. Vince

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 5:52:00 PM
    Andrea- Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 1:15:00 PM
    Congratulations on this lovely poem being featured this week. God bless. Ernilando

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 11:02:00 AM
    Congrats on this one being featured! Great piece.

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 8:41:00 AM
    Congratulations Andrea for having this lovely piece among the featured works this week! Beautifully written! :)

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 3:21:00 AM
    it is an amazing poem... I loved this one, going to be in my favorites...!

  1. Date: 6/23/2009 3:18:00 AM
    pls check ur is urgent and impt.

  1. Date: 6/22/2009 11:04:00 AM
    thank you for the comments. i very much appreciate the encouraging comments. i am very happy to have my first feature. :)

  1. Date: 6/22/2009 4:34:00 AM
    Congratulations on your feature this week !! great write ! james

  1. Date: 6/21/2009 6:41:00 PM
    Nice use of imagery for an interesting perspective. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 8:12:00 AM
    I can almost hear this played to music....the words are so lovely, Andrea. Such a sweet love story. Nicely done ! ~ Love, Carrie