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First Kiss

A boy moved into our small town, lived just down the way,
His British accent and lovely white smile, just made my day.

He invited me to the Easter dance and bought me a corsage
From beginning to end, the whole scene seemed like a mirage.

I wore a new white and yellow dress my Mom sewed for me,
She placed yellow ribbons in my hair, they matched perfectly.

We walked hand in hand to the dance talking about school,
Meanwhile my stomach was churning trying to stay so cool.

We swayed to Hey Jude, I thought I was in heaven for sure,
Yet scared of what would happen next - was I too immature.

Then the song ended, if there were others there I was unaware,
He moved his hands up my arms and touched my lips with care.

My expectations were high, thought I’d know love right away,
But I felt nothing, my hopes dashed, we broke up the next day.

Written August 11, 2012
For Craig Cornish’s contest
“First Kiss”
Placed second in contest

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  1. Date: 9/1/2012 9:55:00 AM
    wonderful poem on your first kiss, Lee, and the ending is a classic.

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 4:49:00 PM
    Wonderfully written.....congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 8/26/2012 10:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your big placement in Craig's contest. Very well deserved.

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 7:08:00 PM
    Ahhh! So romantic and full of young love and emotions..Sad that it ended the next day..Reads like a winner for it has great flow, rhythm, and rhyme..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for stopping by with congrats...Sara

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 6:40:00 PM
    congratulations nice poem

  1. Date: 8/23/2012 6:02:00 PM
    I guess you don't expect as much when your first kiss is at 5! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

    Ramage Avatar Lee Ramage
    Date: 8/23/2012 7:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh, you make me laugh, how true! thanks for your kind comments. Lee
  1. Date: 8/23/2012 12:46:00 AM
    I remember Hey, Jude. That song brought back many happy memories. Congratulations on your win, Lee. Suzette

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 12:56:00 PM
    Sorry for the abrupt end to romance. Great poem. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 10:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Craig's "First Kiss" contest Lee. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 2:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win and your loss xx

  1. Date: 8/21/2012 8:21:00 PM
    With "Hey Jude", you at least had a long dance with him. Good descriptiveness here. This write vicariously placed me at that dance.

    Ramage Avatar Lee Ramage
    Date: 8/21/2012 8:27:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much for your kind comments. Lee
  1. Date: 8/20/2012 6:52:00 PM
    Yup first kisses [or first anythings!] are seldom what they are cracked up to be! [I loved your 3 nickle idea, I for one am glad you are back and always here to help ;)] Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/15/2012 8:59:00 AM
    Liked this one........ George

  1. Date: 8/14/2012 8:56:00 PM
    Really cute Lee. I didn't write one for this contest. Too many kiss contests on at the same time. I tried the other one. Thanks for your kind words. It is sad that we have to outlive so many of our family. I have my sister left and I am the last of my generation along with her. We had five brothers. My son died suddenly in 1999. I still miss him so much. Love, Joyce

    Ramage Avatar Lee Ramage
    Date: 8/15/2012 3:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Very true Joyce, I am sorry about your family. Even years later and I still miss my family. Take care. Makes family times all the more precious and hard. Your work is wonderful. Love Lee
  1. Date: 8/14/2012 6:32:00 PM
    Aw, shoot!!... I can surly identify with the young man as the same happened to me once more or less...well done and very honest poem from you Lee...sure to be among the winners! - Tim

    Ramage Avatar Lee Ramage
    Date: 8/14/2012 7:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Tim for your kind comments... now they wanted honesty right? Take care Lee
  1. Date: 8/14/2012 3:52:00 AM
    this must have been a downer, lee... yet, a tenderly sweet piece of art!... on to the winners' list.. i like!..:) huggs!

    Ramage Avatar Lee Ramage
    Date: 8/14/2012 6:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much Nette, greatly appreciated. You're so sweet. Lee
  1. Date: 8/13/2012 7:15:00 PM
    hahaha, I love this how you ended it. Yep, that sure can happen sometimes. Did you ever read the poem, jenny kissed me? It's totally opposite of this and there was another famous poem about a first kiss that was a lot like yours how it ended, but now I forgot the name of it! Anyway, sure enjoyed this.

    Ramage Avatar Lee Ramage
    Date: 8/13/2012 7:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea, you always are so kind. I,ll go read "Jenny kissed me" , thanks again Lee
  1. Date: 8/12/2012 5:58:00 AM
    Lee a great build up to a dissapointing end, and I don't mean the poem! I like it..good luck...

    Ramage Avatar Lee Ramage
    Date: 8/12/2012 6:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Everyone wants a happy ending but that's the truth.,, maybe I was too honest?
  1. Date: 8/11/2012 10:48:00 AM
    So sweet , but.....broke up the next day.... (?) - well done - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Ramage Avatar Lee Ramage
    Date: 8/11/2012 10:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yes, Craig wanted the truth, and that's the truth. Felt bad but it just didn't cut it. Lee