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Fireflies

~}{~ fireflies dance on peaks of eternal light soft whispers sign ~}{~

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Khalid Darwish

Date: 9/10/2012 7:12:00 AM

Marvellous poem. Thank you for sharing. Love, Khalid

Richard Palmer

Date: 9/3/2012 7:00:00 AM

nice write Tracie,

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/30/2012 8:25:00 AM

This speaks to me in a magical way as I used to sit on a hill with them all around my head dancing in the night sky. Lovely Tracie

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/28/2012 5:10:00 PM

Wondervul haiku, Tracie! I love fireflies but don't see them much in Florida. Your poem is the next best thing. Love And Blessings, Rhonda

Cory Long

Date: 8/28/2012 3:59:00 PM

love fireflies.. Gonna miss catching them.. Time to catch the leaves instead.. Just as fun. Have a great day Cory

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/28/2012 2:11:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Tracie! Love, Kim

Debra Squyres

Date: 8/27/2012 10:44:00 PM

Simply beautiful !!

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 8/27/2012 10:25:00 PM

Lovely haiku! Cynthia

Seth C Mongrut

Date: 8/27/2012 10:08:00 PM

Tracie, We dance as fireflies in the night on peaks of eternal light we play as butterflies in the day as your new friend, I have come here to stay! :) Thank you for "Fireflies," a deep and beautiful creation! Carlos

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/27/2012 9:40:00 PM

Wow, for such a small poem this one sure packs a great punch! The meaning is astounding my friend! I love lightening bugs, they a beautiful to watch! This is a wonderful Haiku Tracie! I just love it, Great Work!!