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Fire Rainbow Clouds

Today I saw an unusual phenomenum Bright colors like a rainbow burst Across a wispy cloud or two Red and copper, blue with sheen like a million tiny candles aquamarine and teal a glimpse of heaven I feel God has blessed me with such a sight like no other shared today with my family a treasure beyond compare also I feel an inner touch from God to me, personally Just to say-have a nice day!! http://images.search.yahoo.com/search/images;_ylt=A0PDoS4ECYNMNTgAJSajzbkF?p=cloud+with+a+rainbow&ei=&iscqry=&fr= ...the rainbow clouds are a new view for me over the past 3 years...every time I see something new in nature I think how BIG is God?? How loved we are!!

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Matthew Anish

Date: 9/12/2010 8:31:00 PM

Nature cam be wonderful or terrible. You capture iits beautiful side very well in this ode. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Hyle Chu

Date: 9/11/2010 10:39:00 AM

"Across a wispy cloud or two", well written. The images are nice. I enjoyed this.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/6/2010 7:38:00 AM

it the wonders of nature, that convince me that it is the work of God. Doris,this is beautifully written. Harry

Brian Strand

Date: 9/6/2010 12:24:00 AM

Yes Doris a rainbow's promise can do this.Rgds Brian

Cecil Hickman

Date: 9/5/2010 9:08:00 PM

beautiful descriptive words with a powerful message truly a wonderful and inspirational write,,,Blessings..Cecil

Cas Davis

Date: 9/5/2010 4:36:00 PM

Very nice poem. Uh.... Doris.... you don't by chance hail from near southern New Zealand do you?

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/5/2010 9:32:00 AM

Beautiful Doris, reminds me of a saying that God whispers to us in his own unique way we just got to be open and willing to listen.. The images are just awesome, love Wilma

Constance La France

Date: 9/5/2010 6:38:00 AM

Thanks for commenting on my poetry. A glimpse of heaven, how beautiful, I believe if we open our eyes, these glimpses are all around us, you have penned a lovely poem, with a tremendous message of God within and around...love Constance

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/5/2010 5:54:00 AM

I love rainbows, when my Dad passed I saw one right over my building where I live... Lovely write and brought back a nice memory..in my fav. it goes...thank you Michael

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 9/5/2010 5:27:00 AM

I normally see that sort of phenomonum from my room which is padded so I dont hurt myself. Funny isn't it D we see the same things. :-)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2010 4:31:00 AM

Your father and I saw one such thing one day and he surprised me by saying that that phenomonum has a scientific name..I haven't seen anything like that in a long time just like the rainbows earlier this year..Long time no see these things..I feel that God is reminding us of his promise..Mom

James Fraser

Date: 9/5/2010 2:36:00 AM

Awesome clouds they are Doris, a prism of colours. Have a great day >> James

Joy Wellington

Date: 9/5/2010 2:02:00 AM

Really, really enjoyed this Doris! Thanks for all comments, I had lost my love but found it again. As the widow who lost her penny and when she found it she called everyone to celebrate with her, so I have found my love again and this is my celebration. The poem, My Tears, is just expressing feelings of regret, for lost time and unnecessary pain for us both. Much luv, Joy (Jew)

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/4/2010 11:04:00 PM

Simply beautiful images..Take care~Deb

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/4/2010 9:32:00 PM

The world is too much with us and we have no time to stand and stare at the nature" Wordworth. But you found the time to watch one of His unusual Phenomenon, Doris