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Fire Fight

How very inconsiderate, dieing in the open; shirking anonymity behind the raging green. You avoided the cacophony, left random bullets blameless, then when your God abandoned You, He left just You, alone; refused to leave your ruined face behind the mangled sandbags, or in a shallow foxhole, instead of here, with Me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/13/2011 9:30:00 AM
Wayne.. congratulations on your wonderful feature of the week... I sure enjoyed... take care,..p.d
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Date: 5/13/2011 9:20:00 AM
Good poem...touching and timely.
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Date: 5/9/2011 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations Wayne on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/9/2011 5:24:00 AM
Congratations on your poem being featured this week, Wayne
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Date: 5/8/2011 4:54:00 PM
Congrats Wayne on your featured poem this week on P.S. a great piece to share with us all my friend with luv.. hope all is well with u..
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