Few Words

Some evening few words pass between us.
You may be reading the paper or a new book,
And I may be planning a new lesson or writing a poem.

These are activities we could do in separate rooms,
Yet the void created when we're apart
 
Is too distracting.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/26/2011 7:34:00 AM
dear mama, where have you been all these while without writing poetry, i've found out a winner in poetry (you) your thoughts are fascinating... melody maker.
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:24:00 PM
No need for words, just the presence would do...delightful and true. Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/16/2011 8:19:00 AM
Ahh...I like this!! This is exactly the way it is....so often no words need to be said...just knowing someone is there is enough. :)
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Date: 1/16/2011 7:29:00 AM
Good one..Together but not together..There if needed but comfortable if not needed...Interesting work..Enjoyed..Sara
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Date: 1/16/2011 6:49:00 AM
oh my, very startling piece, audrey... great use of language to convey your theme! awesome and more..:) huggs, nette
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