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Fever Pitch

. Ka--Rack ! The bat splintered. The excited crowd roared! “Strike Two!” The tense Ump blared hoarsely. Coach screamed, “Bases loaded, two outs! Two strikes! Top of the ninth, down by three, Joe! Blast it outa the park!!” The pitch burned in! KA--RACK !!! 5/30/12 written by Robert A Dufresne for Nette's contest "Sound of Emotion"

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/21/2012 7:16:00 AM

Sounds like you know what you're talking about Robert; the crowds love these games and the excitement generated is sure infectious. You pack all the action in this game, Loved it!

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/3/2012 1:36:00 PM

This is awesome, Robert!!! You brought a ball game to life!! Congratulations are in order in spite of a small oops!! Great job!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/3/2012 12:46:00 AM

robert!!.. how i enjoyed this poem... my bet for top 2, then, i read the 8th line which only had 3 syllables instead of 4... ohhhh!... if i do share this in my contest blog, i hope you won't mind my personal recognitoin of a poem well done!.. a winner in my heart!.. thanks you and hugggs!

Robert A. Dufresne
Date: 6/3/2012 7:14:00 AM

It's those dumb little mistakes that seem to cost alot in life eh ,Nette? Thank you for taking time to comment on my little poem. Your contest was fun! - love, Bob