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Fermenting Wine

In the strait of straight talk Twain shall be able to walk One twin of twain often mocks Causes me, myself and I am talks When human concepts flip Love gives us worthwhile tips Of new wine time to take a sip Wisdom of Love is ocean’s dip When old wine has become inept `Tis time to remember where love is kept Into the serpent the mind doth flip a serpent logic stem, ill equipped Evil was not of Love created of human mind was meditated ample proof is worldly integrated ~ Though tis of love mitigated What has been said… has already been read… time and time again add new message blend! least consciousness suffer again!

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  1. Date: 2/29/2012 10:09:00 PM
    I like the imagery of wine, john. Always a good symbol to use for this kind of message! I really enjoyed your first line too: In the "strait" of straight talk!!

  1. Date: 2/17/2012 7:37:00 AM
    enjoyed reading today....John how are you? Great I hope! I read a book called the shack you might like it. It gives a different perspective on God and the trinity.

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 1:29:00 PM
    Enjoyed your poetry today John, thank you for sharing, love,vie