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Below is the poem entitled FEELING DESOLATED which was written by poet Aneesa Jacobs. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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So many thoughts 
So many concerns 
As the world spins 
My mind overrun 
By emotions and thoughts 
All the good and all the worst 
I rewind the past only to learn 
Even though it hurts 
I'm left with an abstract memory 
I sit and watch the drama before me 
With ink stains 
Mind racing at fast pace 
Sadness of my empty soul awake 
Feeling nothing but hate 
Feeling desolate 
That's when it began 
Haunting me to this day 
As I lay on a heap of mess 
On the edge of death 
Frozen by shock drenched in sweat 
Into the world without care 
And you are there somewhere, out there 
Directed into places unknown 
Not knowing your way back home.. 

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