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Feeling

My love does not see my tears fall, nor does he see my smile grow
His hands and heart alone seek my happiness and loneliness
Sightless since birth, he views the world through his touch and emotions


Dedicated to all those who are blind, yet still see the world in so many ways...

For the Contest "A Short Poem, Please"
Written by: Shani Fassbender

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John Freeman Date: 9/3/2011 11:33:00 AM This is beutifully heartfelt, Shani......congratulations on your poem's worthiness. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 9/3/2011 10:27:00 AM Many congratulations, Shani : ) Login to Reply

Lori Lucas Mcclure Date: 9/3/2011 10:21:00 AM Congratulations !!!!!!!!------Lori Login to Reply

Caryl Ramsdale Date: 9/3/2011 3:27:00 AM An Honorable Mention Win Congratulations. CR Login to Reply

Lee Ramage Date: 9/2/2011 1:18:00 AM Beautiful poem, and from your photo, he is missing real beauty. Congratulations on your HM of this poem. Take care and well done. Lee Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/1/2011 4:37:00 PM A beautiful write Shani, congratulations on your placement with this gem :) love Wilma Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/1/2011 2:19:00 PM Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Shani. Love, Carol Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 9/1/2011 11:43:00 AM hey Shani congrats on your Hm ..David Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/1/2011 11:37:00 AM Congrats Shani on your HM in this contest with profound poetry luv.. enjoy special honor with great dedication too.. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/1/2011 11:10:00 AM Congratulations on the win,Shani Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/7/2011 12:27:00 PM This is very heartfelt and beautiful. Congratulations. Shani. Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 5/6/2011 8:00:00 AM Beautiful, soji with a powerful message, Shani. thank you for sharing and many congrats on your BIG WIN., Lainie Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/5/2011 8:05:00 PM emotive piece that make me cheer for your great glory win, shani... :) huggs! Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/5/2011 3:35:00 PM Awesome poem, Shani. I had a friend who was blind since birth and you conveyed the way she lived her life so well. Congratulations on your win in the "Sweet Sijo" contest. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 5/4/2011 1:54:00 PM Many congratulations on your win, Shani : ) Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 5/4/2011 1:37:00 PM Congrats my dear on your win!! Login to Reply

Emma Buckeridge Date: 5/4/2011 12:34:00 PM A lovely poem and a great win. xx Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 5/4/2011 12:27:00 PM Congrats Shani on your win with this lovely Sijo.Loved how you penned the last line.just so beautiful..Love, gautami Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/4/2011 11:27:00 AM Congratulations Shani on your win in Adeleke's contest "Sweet Sijo". Love, Carol Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 5/4/2011 10:16:00 AM Shani , it's great to see you in the top three again. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Adeleke Adeite Date: 5/4/2011 6:49:00 AM Thanks Shani for supporting my contest. This piece is an emotional one, it caught my attention so much, it's so cute & creative. Congrats on your 3rd place win in the contest, keep your passionate pen performing on this pleasant platform... poetry, which you all the best. Adeleke Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 5/4/2011 6:20:00 AM this is wonderful..congrats on your big win.. BG Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/4/2011 4:41:00 AM Congrats Shani on your excellent win in Sweet Sijo contest with this wonderful write and entry luv.. perfect title too.. enjoy ... Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/4/2011 4:30:00 AM Congratulations on the third place win in the contest, shani Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/19/2011 5:18:00 PM Thoughful expressions on feeling, Shani Login to Reply