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FEEDING HORSES She was four years old Apples in bulging pockets from garden trees Cold day in autumn Stroll down to Paddy Sands’s horse pasture Stop at five-bar gate and lift her up Call or whistle - they come from a half-kilometre Black, brown mares, one gelding Jealous one tries to bite the others Jostling for position at the gate All those soft soft noses..... They will permit stroking If fed enough handfuls of grass Grass tastes better from our hands Than when cropped by them, (Especially with tiny flowers of blue vetch). Their big brown eyes close up So peaceful and trusting Tempting furry ears just out of reach for her Turning cold now after half an hour Spoil them with our apples before we go home Show her how to hold back her thumb So it doesn’t get bitten. Walk home through Sands’s cropped hayfield To tea and biscuits. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written for Carol Brown's Contest "A Horse Story"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/28/2011 1:51:00 PM
Sydney, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:38:00 PM
this is utterly adorable and one that I would put much higher on the list. Very enjoyable to read. I loved it.
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:43:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara
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Date: 6/23/2011 5:32:00 PM
Would have been much higher for me! Such a sweet horse tail! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/23/2011 4:55:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Syd. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 6/23/2011 1:51:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Sydney
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Date: 6/23/2011 12:37:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Sidney Beck
Date: 6/23/2011 1:07:00 PM
a lovely contest and an opportunity to remind myself of my daughter when she was small....thanks for the contest and for the placing Carol....best wishes

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