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Fear Turns To Fairytale

"A woodland path in the dappled sun, hushed and quiet " ~A Rambling Poet~ Are the woods waiting to spring a surprise, do I hear haunting melodies and cries, Is there someone hiding behind those trees, are the woods filled with painfully stinging bees, I tread slowly for there might be a snake, my throat is parched, is there a lake? Are there strange creatures hanging from those firs, am I hallucinating? My heart is in a stir... That light ahead, is it fog or a ghostly apparition, scared I walk on biting my nails, eyes wide open. Thoughts, then run rushing back to childhood and suddenly I am brave like little Red Riding Hood. Fearless of the wolves that’ll cross my path I surge ahead, with a song in my heart. Maybe I’ll find a cottage like Goldilocks with porridge filled in three little pots. I even might end up with dwarfs seven in number waiting for a prince while in slumber. My fears all vanish one by one the power of nature overwhelms I look up at the woods in awe and wonder to God’s fairytale I surrender… Afroze for Constances's contest A woodland path 7/6/2011

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Date: 6/18/2011 6:14:00 AM
marvellous poem....loved the idea behind it...keep it up...and all the best....
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Date: 6/14/2011 7:30:00 AM
charming write congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/13/2011 11:53:00 PM
This is super Afroze. Loved the rhyme and images. Many congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/13/2011 9:17:00 PM
from fear to awe to surrender. Just wonderful. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/13/2011 3:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 6/13/2011 12:49:00 PM
An apt title to this awesome poem. Good job and congratulations on your well-deserved placement. :-)
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Date: 6/13/2011 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations Afroze, on your first place win with this lovely write~ Caryl
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Date: 6/13/2011 7:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "A Woodland Path" contest Afroze. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/12/2011 2:04:00 PM
I am reading another beautiful write after Linda's, these woodland poems...Love fairy tales and you've enthralled me today Afroze with this one.many congrats on your well deserved 1st place win..love, gautami
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Date: 6/12/2011 11:41:00 AM
Beautifully writen!.Many Congrats on your first place win in constance's contest.cheers
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:18:00 AM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Afroze
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:15:00 AM
Such a great imagination!! Congratulations on your win!!! :)
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Date: 6/12/2011 7:15:00 AM
I loved little red riding hood as a child this was a fantastic write congrats on your win.. croy
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Date: 6/12/2011 7:14:00 AM
congrats on this fantastic win. cory
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Date: 6/12/2011 7:14:00 AM
Congrats Alfroze on your first place win in this beautiful contest with an equally beautiful entry luv.. enjoy..top billing..
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Date: 6/12/2011 6:38:00 AM
Congratulations, Afroze, on a shared first place win in my contest with this sublime and divine poem. Could you please send me by soupmail your address so I can forward the Certificate of Achievement in Poetry which is the prize for this contest ~~
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Date: 6/7/2011 6:10:00 AM
Very nice poem Afroze..enjoyed.Best wishes.
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