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Favourite Thoughts

blow me wind
o blow me away
To my favourite thoughts

dress in white satin
meet sweet jasmines
kiss red roses

white clouds 
come alive 
in their flapping tender wings

delicate drizzles
drop on my face
feel  with
glittering loves

kiss me wind
o kiss me wild
ruffle my hairs
 till i tickle giggle

blow me wind
o blow me away
to meet my sweetest memory

when i drank his first
stupid words
said “ i love you”
in a quite beautiful  nuance

blow me wind 
o blow me away
weather wise
such a lovely day

My favourite thoughts
i worship and adore

~sukmawati komala~
21 March 2013

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  1. Date: 4/8/2013 12:38:00 PM
    Dreamy and sweet! :) Thanks for your visits, my dear! Hugs!

  1. Date: 4/2/2013 1:47:00 AM
    you have a sense of humor I see " when you drank his first "stupid" words. We all get trapped and fall over them words. thank you for reading Beauty Queen my sweet friend. I do like your favorite thoughts ;}xo's

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 4:06:00 AM
    I love to investigate your favorite thoughts Suki, you are fanciful and sweet with a touch of romance in your words. Love to visit you, Hugs, Lizzie

  1. Date: 3/29/2013 10:25:00 AM
    Another compelling and refreshing verse, Sukamawati...Love the repeating lines 'blow me wind, o blow me away'...Beautiful poetry from a beautiful and classy lady! - Tim

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 4:43:00 PM
    Dear Sukmawati, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I usually read the comments to help me comment as I am a novice POET.However there are only 2 I'll give it a go alone.YOU have many Favourite thoughts that you impressed upon my mind."Kiss Red Roses" in the second verse All of the 3rd verse "delicate drizzles" "ruffle my hairs" "to meet my sweetest Memory" this is a favourite.I just read Harry Horsman's Contest Winning POEM "Living POETRY" I noticed YOU

    Esquire Avatar HGarvey Daniel Esquire
    Date: 3/24/2013 4:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Commented on this POEM before he Won. I was wondering if YOU were going to send Congrats. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
  1. Date: 3/23/2013 5:30:00 PM
    Dear friend, Sukmawati Komala, this poem blows me away too! It really flows and blows! Great work!