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~*~ Overwhelming Is the rapture of love, the grief for all those I hold dear. O, infinite death, this throbbing aching. This imprint on the mind, never-ending pain of memory. O, the images, tokens, recollections. All the dreams that haunt me, vast paintings of days long past. O, torment and anguish of love and death. Bottomless is the pain, I fall each night into darkness. O, I cherish each weeping, stabbing tear. So, heartbreaking, the grief, but an endless chasm, rumbling as the deep blue sea, whispering, murmuring and sighing. ~*~ March 16, 2013 Abysmal Poetry (created by Constance) Syllable Count 4/ only once then 6/8/10 for as many stanza's as wanted, ending with 1/3 2/5/7/9 Theme . . . unfathomable emotions

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  1. Date: 5/13/2013 8:10:00 PM
    Great piece. Love the "stabbing tear". I enjoyed this. :)

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 8:40:00 AM
    You lift the heart to the mind and the minds eye to an understanding of what dwells within the soul of your being Constance. Thank you .

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 11:32:00 PM
    Quite a deep and hauunting write here Constance; and i see you are attempting another form of poetry as well, wish you well in your writes and best thoughts and wishes to you..)

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 2:33:00 PM
    by the way, I remember you telling me how much you love movies too. It would be so neat to go with you to some movies. I am almost always alone when I go also.

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 2:32:00 PM
    wow, your title for this form really fits the subject matter as well, Constance. Can abysmal also be of a more upbeat nature? I really enjoyed this. You should see if you can contact marie summer over at and have your poetry form added to her list of new poetry forms. I have two over there! Well done!

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 7:31:00 AM
    Good stuff, dear heart. Your picture must belie your age. These are the ramblings of an old woman or old man. I ought to know. At 83 I've had past ramblings myself. Anywho. Love your style and want to read much more of you. daver

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 11:25:00 AM
    Constance, beautiful words and thoughts behind this thoughtful poem! - Thank you for visiting my last posted. - Have a lovely Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 10:33:00 AM
    wow, just love this, Constance. Would love to try this form - how about a contest for everyone to try your clever new form? love to you and the kitties xx

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 5:58:00 AM
    Beautiful poem, Constance, and a lovely form. I think I shall give it a try. hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 1:33:00 PM
    I have to say this Constance...this poem is DEEP! I thoroughly enjoyed your spectacular write my friend! You love the more depressing works don't you? But you are VERY good at them I must say! What an incredible piece, Great Work!!