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Fate's Unfairness

I love to send this sad thought of fate's unfairness into the depth of oblivion, forgetting as it had never occurred and troubled me in the tenderest years; could I really forget all the grief and wrath which I had to face holding back tears? A lost youth can't be replaced by realizing its dimension. Were others more deserving than I? My glances showed no envy, but desire was way too intense to find happiness or even a little joy; why did fate continuously deny me to exult love in its splendid ways with an amorous sentence?

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Date: 1/31/2013 9:41:00 PM
Andrew, congratulations with your poem in frank's "Something to forget " contest. enjoyed the ending... pd
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Date: 1/22/2013 7:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrew - Ralph
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Date: 1/22/2013 2:26:00 PM
I've felt this way for years and then we must think ..how have we grown..because we are alone? When not alone I tend to focus all my energy on others giving away bit after bit of me. Conrad's on your winning writes. Light & Love
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Date: 1/21/2013 9:29:00 PM
Fantastic Andrew,great win!
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