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Faster Than the Others

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Faster Than the Others

crack the egg
chick embryo in the slime
there's a sign

crack one more
this one's safe to eat I'm sure
chew it fast

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  1. Date: 4/20/2013 9:35:00 AM
    Impressions don't go away very quickly do they? Traumatic stress from an egg-yikes.

  1. Date: 4/19/2013 6:02:00 AM I'd have eaten the first one too...hahahaha

    Breidenthal Avatar Laura Breidenthal
    Date: 4/19/2013 4:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hahaha crazy Caleb at his best! XD You're awesome. c:
  1. Date: 4/18/2013 11:10:00 PM
    good thing there is a sign in that first one. These were sure different, and I enjoyed the read!

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 7:07:00 PM