Fascination

I smile as I write this
It makes me sit and ponder
I think my head is spinning
My mind in constant wonder

Through all my living years
I have tried to figure out
Put some pieces together
How it works, what it's about

I am sure to find the answer
Maybe even tonight
Elusive as it may seem
Love at the very first sight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/27/2010 11:25:00 PM
A head full of secret thoughts and hopes, that is the picture I see in your smile. I too, sure hope you find the answer...good one Mitch.....Margaret
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Date: 3/26/2010 6:58:00 AM
Well good luck Mitch with your love at first sight tonight.. great poetry here .. so enjoyed this read.. lighthearted yet intense at the same time..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 3/25/2010 1:21:00 PM
There is an earnest quality to this that I like. It has appeal, greatness be damned and all poets, including the immortals, in my opinion, should dabbl;e in a clutch of these. I'm glad you liked the ride with Foghorn. An astute critic said once that the bestof these WB cartoons are the finest comedies for sheer fun and laughter ever made. I think that he was right. Regards, Gerard. God! Where are they today!!!
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Date: 3/25/2010 11:53:00 AM
I am so happy to see your poem amongst the ones I am reading today Mitch. Thank you for sharing. Wishing you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration and hope for a better tomorrow. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2010 8:13:00 AM
When I first saw my late husband, it was "love at first sight." Sometimes I think our hearts just know when that special someone makes an appearance. Beautifully written, Mitch! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/25/2010 7:08:00 AM
Very nice write Mitch.....Larry
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Date: 3/25/2010 5:33:00 AM
Great write Mitch - I enjoyed reading this write about that elusive "love at the first sight" Thanks for sharing-:)
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Date: 3/25/2010 4:53:00 AM
Whatever or whoever the love is congratulations in finding love at first sight..Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my poem "The Obligation"....Sara
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Date: 3/24/2010 11:33:00 PM
GREAT! Loved it!
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