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False Pride

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False Pride

I have fallen in deep with pride tonight       
My good intention used against me             
I’m beguiled by ego’s pompous might         

Dismissed was true grace; now I see          
When clouded judgment led me onto           
The reefs below and turbulent sea            

‘Take a moment... maybe turn and run!         
From false pride, you must disengage          
Heed your conscience or come undone         

Hear my words, do not become enraged                                                           
Endless is haunting of conscience, near dead   
In this I implore you, with me, engage!'              

What you choose this night determines tomorrow..                                                             
Turn about my friend; turn away from sorrow'.                                                                      

For Craig's "Terza Rima Sonnet Contest"
(My first attempt at this and I'm afraid it's far from perfect) 
Thanks to the friends who gave me much needed help...still revising.

Copyright © Annalise a.k.a. Audrey Haick

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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 3:27:00 AM
    A really powerful write my friend. Well done.

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 7:08:00 AM
    You have done a wonderful job. You should be proud of this fine poem. It would not be false pride.

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 2:57:00 AM
    Good for you, Annalise...The message of this write is so powerful. Wonderful advice. :) I haven't attempted one of these either....I hope I can get something going soon. Thanks for your visit to my work. Your comment is most appreciated. Hugs

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 10:10:00 AM
    lovely write, my friend, and such a strong message here

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 8:53:00 PM
    This is a great poem and I think it will do very good in the contest.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 11:58:00 AM
    great write wishes

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 9:50:00 AM
    DO NOT APOLOGIZE my dear sweet Annalise... this was a great write! "What you choose this night determines tomorrow"... great thought! Love ya! Great big huggs, Jack xoxoxox

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 9:47:00 AM
    Damn right! Fair play. Fantastic lines!

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 8:11:00 AM
    Hi Annalise, soup mail

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 7:28:00 AM
    Great one, Annalise! We all have to be careful with that. You did a great job :). Good luck in the contest.

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 7:06:00 AM
    powerful, thoughtful, very good write.

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 5:50:00 AM
    'Turn about my friend; turn away from the sorrow'...WOW, perfect ending line for this little gem Annalise and with your first attempt at this form you knocked it out of the park! - Tim