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False Charms Begone

You made an attempt to bamboozle me with well thought out charms But I still struggle internally from the last charmer I once held in my arms My inner soul continues to burn and the flame tortures me still From the last abomination who tried to bend me of my free will. If you push me into a relationship when I'm not ready to bloom You will hear the wrath of my scorn as I run screaming from the room Instead cherish me and let me follow you one baby step at a time Only then will I relax enough to give our bond a chance to become sublime. Show me your tender side for that will win me over more than know I just may develop a taste for you that will set your face aglow Before long I may be the one yearning to spend more time with you Then behold the affection and passion that will most definitely ensue. For Dictionary fun....#1...Delilah's Words! Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/16/2013 4:58:00 PM
Love it Cecilia,,, and you won, awesome. thank you for reading family hair
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Date: 12/16/2012 10:41:00 AM
aha, I see you won in the contest. Nicely done, my friend. Way to go!!
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Date: 12/10/2012 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations Cecilia ...Seren
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Date: 12/10/2012 5:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning place Cecilia xx
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Date: 12/10/2012 12:14:00 AM
I love this Cecilia! More often than not people attempt to rush things along where relationships are concerned - as you've well said, that is not the way. Well done!
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Date: 12/9/2012 3:31:00 PM
A well deserved win poem, congratulations. -A poem to be proud of, very well written. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/9/2012 1:33:00 PM
Cecilia, awee,,, deep... love the "Dictionary fun" here.... Congratulations (-: always~&~forever :-) PD
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Date: 12/3/2012 11:04:00 AM
Good advice and it sounds promising but....
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Date: 11/29/2012 4:42:00 PM
Hey,hey! That is nice! I couldn't even sence that you had to use certin words? And so nice to finely get to read one of your fine works again! :o) Thanks again for stopping bye...Always happy to see your smiling face. :-)
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Date: 11/29/2012 10:33:00 AM
A poem that comes from your heart Cecilia .... - Hope you are doing fine. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/28/2012 10:44:00 AM
written like you have been hurt before, your poetry, is your strength dear Lady, shows both compassion and one does not suffer fools , love your poem,
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Date: 11/26/2012 8:46:00 AM
What's that old saying, "once bitten, twice shy" Isn't love an adventure... big big hugs, Jack
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Date: 11/25/2012 9:46:00 PM
This is so well written and so very well expressed Cecillia... kudos, my friend! Love and hugs, Jack
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Date: 11/25/2012 8:39:00 PM
Cecilla, you have expressed very well how true love and tender wisdom entreats. Wonderful poem.
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Date: 11/25/2012 12:26:00 PM
sis, thats's the way one step at a time, I love the way you make it flow with such ease and it is very romantic...David
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Date: 11/24/2012 2:33:00 PM
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Date: 11/23/2012 9:54:00 PM
You chose a good way to do the challenge with those words. I think everyone is writing about the same kind of stuff because the words definitely lead us to this way of thinking. But even so, yours is unique, Cecilia. The way you took it to mean a lesson on not forcing love!
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Date: 11/23/2012 10:48:00 AM
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Date: 11/22/2012 6:29:00 PM
That is a wonderful promise, I hope the right guy listens and fully appreciates you. Great Poem!
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