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Falling

The whole world is out to get me so I run away; I hide. In the garage, under the bed, On the roof. No one bothers to look for me anymore. I am being abandoned. So as I sat on the roof, I wondered what it would be like if I jumped. Would it feel like I was flying? Will it be what I imagine? Or will I fall to the ground quickly, landing in a deflated heap? I want to fall forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/30/2010 6:36:00 AM
good write, it sounds like you're a little paralyzed with paranoia that mad maniacle self destroyer
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Date: 7/28/2010 3:01:00 PM
Experimentive. If you do jump let me know how it goes. Just kidding. this is an excellent poem. Don't mind me, I'm not all here.
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Date: 7/28/2010 12:28:00 PM
DEEP WRITE, ENJOYED -SKAT
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