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Below is the poem entitled Falling which was written by poet Destiny Echo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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My wings are broken for the words unspoken
And i'm falling so fast
Falling, falling into the past
Theres nobody there to catch me
I'm going to hit the ground
Air passes around me
A silent screaming sound
My eyes are tightly shut
I can't see a thing
My arms are outstretched
Reaching, grasping only air
My small filter of hope has

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  1. Date: 3/1/2010 11:33:00 AM
    THE NAME OF THE POEM IS''lost in life''..your poem is ''FALLING''. I feel like that when no one is thier to pick me up....

  1. Date: 3/1/2010 11:29:00 AM
    I really enjoyed your poem. I got one for you to read of mine if you please..A close relation to your poem ontop.

  1. Date: 2/12/2010 12:11:00 PM
    i like this poem of yours it flows smooth reached out and grabed me ... good job keep writtin

  1. Date: 2/9/2010 11:03:00 AM
    smooth write. love your work. best wishes.....

  1. Date: 2/9/2010 9:25:00 AM
    I love this. Its beautiful, and smooth. .:Rain:.

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 12:59:00 PM
    Sounds lonely and scary. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara