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Falling

My wings are broken for the words unspoken And i'm falling so fast Falling, falling into the past Theres nobody there to catch me I'm going to hit the ground Air passes around me A silent screaming sound My eyes are tightly shut I can't see a thing My arms are outstretched Reaching, grasping only air My small filter of hope has Dissappeared

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/1/2010 11:33:00 AM
THE NAME OF THE POEM IS''lost in life''..your poem is ''FALLING''. I feel like that when no one is thier to pick me up....
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Date: 3/1/2010 11:29:00 AM
I really enjoyed your poem. I got one for you to read of mine if you please..A close relation to your poem ontop.
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Date: 2/12/2010 12:11:00 PM
i like this poem of yours it flows smooth reached out and grabed me ... good job keep writtin
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Date: 2/9/2010 11:03:00 AM
smooth write. love your work. best wishes.....
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Date: 2/9/2010 9:25:00 AM
I love this. Its beautiful, and smooth. .:Rain:.
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Date: 2/3/2010 12:59:00 PM
Sounds lonely and scary. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
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