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Fallen Down

fall end down some, someone that can’t find me when I’m lost and all the pieces I picked up that everyone behind me forgot and the small of me is somewhere well beyond me caught up If we get to get to that again Well we get to do that The days move faster And the knees Get to be bruised Under the jeans

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/14/2009 10:24:00 PM
Wonderful write here ... love the last 4 lines!! You must have been saving these up, Gerry ... glad you're back at the Soup!!
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Date: 8/14/2009 10:49:00 AM
What a day. Some very unbelieveably outstanding writes I am reading today.Thank you for sharing yours with us Gerry. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/14/2009 3:54:00 AM
Interesting. Sara
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