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Fallen Angels

fallen angels casualties of sin in darkness lay

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John Freeman

Date: 1/21/2011 6:19:00 PM

Yes excellent job, Deb, a third I believe. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 1/21/2011 6:18:00 PM

For a guy who ain't religious, I love writing and reading about angels. It's the Dark Side in me. Koolio Senryu Deb...:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/21/2011 3:41:00 PM

Quite a vivid image of the fallen angels you have painted, Deb. Excellent work with the senryu form as well as the imagery. Love, Carolyn

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/21/2011 9:36:00 AM

A very descriptive senryu. Good work. I love it!!! Very descriptive! Christine

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2011 9:18:00 AM

This is very good, Deb. They are indeed casualties of sin!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/21/2011 8:52:00 AM

The weekend is upon us once again and I hope yours is wonderful and that you might find the inspiration to keep writing your excellent poetry. It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Deb. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/21/2011 8:25:00 AM

A very descriptive senryu. Good work.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/21/2011 6:54:00 AM

Intellectual write on the fallen angels with apt images, deb