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Fall To Grace

Johnny's up on the ledge again Third time this year Looking for a glimpse of beauty That will drag him back down But it's a gloomy Glasgow morning And all he sees is misery and despair God's curious creation Has never looked so bleak No kids at play, no laughter in the air Just sullen, worn-out faces And poverty everywhere It's a life sentence Johnny knows only to well But he puts his right foot forward And finally escapes from his cell Freedom courses through his veins As he hurtles towards the ground A five-second thrill ride To end his years of hell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/12/2009 11:56:00 AM
Wow! What a tragedy. Too many lives end because of despiration. The emotion comes through your words. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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Date: 10/14/2008 1:43:00 AM
This gets me thinking adn wondering how many times I try to free myself daming the consequences on others and the souls that wait on my strength for my grace that is the key to their freedom. Quite deep Kevin, good job!
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Date: 10/1/2008 6:10:00 AM
Well, that is just very sad. A part of me wants to believe, yes he is free now, but I think of all the years he suffered, and I think also maybe he left loved ones behind. Much comes to mind with this depressing write. Well written. Love, Shar
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