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Below is the poem entitled FALL OUT which was written by poet SEAN CLAUDINE. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.



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      Forgive me not my dear
Even though apart feels like a tearing of flesh
And even now
Our hearts already lonely before we do apart
Let me walk away my love.

Some men are meant to journey alone.
True a lovely thing we had
Now before us is my mess of all our hopes
Pain is all I caused in the end
What of all awhile? Promises of a single lifetime spent together
Whispers spoken in the heat of passion
 Torn asunder, between loving me
Wanting to walk away.
With time I changed, did I not…………but
In the beginning did I ever deceive you?
                                                               Did I lead you on with lies?
Regrets is all we have now
Was I worth all that pain I caused, all your sacrifices?
Need I convince you to let me walk away my love.

To let me shy away with my shame
I'm no lover to abide
Move on and find your happiness with another
Maybe then my regrets will fade to old memories
And vague recollections.
We can build other hopes and dream on them if we dare.
Memories will with time perish,
Some as I write this verse
 I shed off my memory with each tear I shed for us.
Doubtless some will recline with me in eternal slumber.
Forever cherished, a lifetime’s reminder of love
And Its high cost in heartache.

                To stop you I will not try dear, I hurt you bad I know
                I love you is not enough to answer for my crimes nor is it even a worth excuse
I of all people shouldn’t be the one to hurt but care and love
In all sincerity nothing justifies or redeems my actions to you
You do not deserve that sort of treatment
As you walk away please learn that from my mistakes
And whoever he is, out there …………….
I hope he treats you better
I love you dear
, I was tired, I was angry, I felt worthless
I tried talking to you but you weren’t really giving me the attention I needed at that moment
So when you  ………………… wasn’t all for you. It was for him and for life

I also am needy
I'm sorry because I really do love you and I hurt you the most and now I stand to lose you.

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  1. Date: 10/10/2013 1:17:00 PM
    very deep xxx