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Every difficulty is starting like a drop
And all they have gathered to make up a sea
I have started becoming someone else
and feel can never become whom i wanted to be.
It feels like I am sailing tide full of water
and uncertain to see any coast and land on some shore
seems like life has nothing any better
with happiness a  dream and love no more 

Everyday is becoming a new challenge for me
Problems  have gathered and solution I don't see
Its very certain no one believes me
My past always suggests its hard to trust me.
Sorrow I have gathered and unhappiness shall I give
the deeds I have done no one will forgive
from lies to truth a hard path to perceive
And I have done it all now with nothing to deceive.

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  1. Date: 4/29/2013 6:56:00 PM
    Hello Ashwin, "Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda: many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems. I Hope you find what you are looking for when it comes to poetry inspiration. I would love to offer any poem you recommend positive feedback. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"