Faces of Loneliness

Quiet corners of the night
hold the secrets of sadness.
Lonesome souls without the light
cascading the waves of madness.

Forgotten by everyone they know
with their humanity torn.
Days are torture and nights so slow
they wish they were never born.

Lonely eyes will gaze at you;
foreheads lined with worry.
We pass them quickly by it's true;
pretend we're in a hurry.

Lost souls that cannot comprehend
what turned their tears to rust.
This road has just a dark dead end;
But for grace that could be us.



written October 15th for contest "Faces Of Loneliness"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 10/23/2013 8:17:00 PM
Deb, awesome deep win.. LOVE -- SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:19:00 PM
Sweet win Deb... congrats...LINDA
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Date: 10/21/2013 11:21:00 AM
Congrats on your winning placement, Deb! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/21/2013 8:16:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, deb
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Date: 10/18/2013 6:53:00 PM
Tears to rust before anyone notices....great visual....hope you are happy deb.....congratulations..... :-)
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Date: 10/15/2013 9:33:00 AM
Beautifully written Deb, the sad thing is ,people that feel like this by themselves but put their game face on for everyone and hide it.Anne
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Date: 10/15/2013 8:03:00 AM
Sad with a lonely cry in each word. The ending is perfect.
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Date: 10/15/2013 7:18:00 AM
Well written expressions on loneliness, Deb
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Date: 10/15/2013 6:53:00 AM
And we move on even through the darkest hours my friend! This is an amazing write! I truly enjoyed reading this outstanding poem this morning! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 10/15/2013 4:19:00 AM
- We human beings close our eyes and go by .... - Well written, Deb! - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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