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Eyes Glued Shut

Droplets redder than Beaujolais Speckled the new bone-white carpet And glued the eyes wider shut Froth does not cloak the glass shards larger than silver dollars Each sharper than a lions prong Piercing and tearing soft tissue It might as well have been my heart I thought she was my haven, sanctuary Refuge from evil gods and sometimes from good Who was I to trust? Sugar It melts in your mouth yet leaves a sour after-taste One times two And two times three Shame and more shame on me Damn Fool Stare at those stitches And the bare muscles exposed I smile and grimace She says they were self inflicted Maybe they were And maybe they were not She used to have a name It used to be Elena Now she has none She used to have a face Now she has none As she was -- she is gone Bye her – hello tiny bubbles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/12/2010 9:48:00 PM
this is a very interesting write, Alan. don't even blame yourself, you see, that is what the woman's mind can do to a man, she can use you like a tool and act innocent when she is around you, so that it may seem like everything was your fault in the end, soon calling yourself the "fool". but thats not the case, its only a lesson learned in life.lol.by the way, "My Playground" was a joke, i don't do such things to young men, i try and "open" their eyes to love.(: ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 6/11/2010 8:25:00 PM
Not sure I understand it, but it was quite interesting. It reminded me of the animated film CAroline I took my grandson to, where the evil mother hid a grusomely stitched face and button eyes behind a real face. My grandson got afraid. It was very "dark" for kids!! Clever title too! LUv, andrea
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Date: 6/11/2010 10:55:00 AM
You haven't been the object of one of Lynette Chachere's playgrounds, have you. Read her poem and it sounds like you're her antithisesis. Nicely written for all of us who have been there! Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.
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Date: 6/11/2010 9:17:00 AM
This is very imaginative. The words flow very well and send a message. I like the essence of the poem also. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/11/2010 9:16:00 AM
WOW clever write love this work x sarah ...thanks for commenting on mine
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