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Below is the poem entitled Exit which was written by poet William Crocker. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Exit

Keep me close For time is running out I’ve moved Too far . . . Too fast . . . In the corridors of time. . . . Swiftly . . . I’ve run by the side roads Leading to slow and easy times. I’ve picked no flowers Along the streams and paths, Wasted no time On songs And tales Of travelers along the way. The moments . . . The hours . . . The days . . . The “glittering coins of time,” I’ve spent without a thought. The purse will soon be empty. The "EXIT" sign looms large . . . And grins Above the door That opens its arms to fold me . . . Softly . . . Into night’s dark bosom.

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  1. Date: 10/31/2012 8:59:00 AM
    food for thought - we never know when we will be asked to step through the exit door

  1. Date: 11/16/2011 1:06:00 AM
    These articulate words you've formed into a whole poem gives me a chill down my spine! :) Wow, you're a cool poet!

  1. Date: 9/21/2011 7:27:00 AM
    I hope that you don't exit life for a long time so that we have the opportunity of reading many more of your great works...Thanks for the kind review of my work..I appreciate you stopping by...If I have not said so, welcome to soup..May your stay be long with many more great post..Sara

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 7:25:00 PM
    Jha, When I first read your review I wandered who this perceptive poet was. Iread several of your poems and I'm flattered that you commented on my work. I will be commenting on your poems shortly.You do mhave a poets heart. Thanks-Crossfox

  1. Date: 9/14/2011 1:55:00 PM
    This breaks the silence ....indomitable suffering is very much present here...wonderful write william..cheers !!!

    Crocker Avatar William Crocker
    Date: 9/14/2011 7:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Jha , I sent your reply to the wrong section on my poem. Sorry! Crossfox.
  1. Date: 9/11/2011 1:51:00 AM
    This sounds like a trip to Vegas.Quite the gambler are we......them damned slots will do it every time!I know that this is not what your poem is about though it was the first thing that crossed my mind when I seen glittering coins and a grinning exit.Well done!

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 6:07:00 PM
    wow...this is a wonderful piece William...a pleasure to read....smiles....chiquita

  1. Date: 8/31/2011 1:54:00 PM
    Enjoyed your poetry today and hope to be back soon to read more. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry William. Love, Carol