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Excuses are Born

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Excuses are Born

With his back against a wall of steel
caught in a silken, sticky web
the cloak of guilt fits him well
mind racing, eyes darting
excuses are born!
He finds a voice
and stammers--
"It wasn’t 

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  1. Date: 3/13/2013 11:03:00 PM
    We all seem in the greatest denial at the very end, when there's no where else to run. I'd like to know the extent of his guiltiness! Very apt title... I enjoy your work Annalise.

  1. Date: 2/2/2013 9:46:00 AM
    Love it, Nicely done poet. I'm litsenning poet.

  1. Date: 1/20/2013 11:52:00 AM
    Amazing write! I love the way you lead me up to the finish line! :) Thanks for sharing!

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 4:03:00 PM
    You are so right. It wasn't me either. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 1/14/2013 10:14:00 AM
    love this - you've captured this situation perfectly : )

  1. Date: 1/12/2013 11:42:00 AM
    the first sin of guilt!

  1. Date: 1/11/2013 1:51:00 PM
    I was caught up within it and loved the finish...Very good !! I must try this form, I like the display !! Enjoyed !!

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 3:08:00 PM
    Annalise a very good Nonetheless Poem. I loved that he was caught in a silken sticky web like a spider's prey, also the cloak of guilt. Very descriptive. You convey your message very well. Warm Smiles, Connie.

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 11:43:00 AM
    Good poem, interesting form :)

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 9:57:00 AM
    Fine drama here, Analise. Love, daver

  1. Date: 1/10/2013 1:56:00 AM
    Annalise I just love this, if for the contest it is the best one I have read, good luck...David

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 10:04:00 PM
    oh, I just loved that ending. Of course, that is what he would say!!!

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 2:51:00 PM
    Ahhh!! Cute one..I can just see a little boy with cookie crumbs on his face..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Thanks for letting me know that I placed in a contest..Sara

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 5:08:00 AM
    You made me chuckled, Annalise. So fittingly described. Love it :)

  1. Date: 1/9/2013 4:59:00 AM
    you are truly amazing Annalise, this is wonderful....

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 6:14:00 PM
    Nice write! ---Lori