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Everyting with him and nothing without

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Everyting with him and nothing without

I wonder if he knows
What he means to me
That he is my life
He is my everything
Without him I am empty
My mind a blank page
My heart a shattered memory
My love turned to hate
But when he is near
My life colors the world
It shines through my eyes
And I am the happiest girl

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  1. Date: 9/14/2012 10:39:00 PM
    I have known the treasure and pain of such feelings...I fear we have given up too much power to the craziness of love...yet you have penned a verse only love will allow. Lovely! Cynthia

  1. Date: 3/3/2012 9:37:00 AM
    this is the purpose of poetry.

  1. Date: 3/1/2012 3:40:00 PM
    Hi Jenni, you have a wery good poem here love to read it.Sending you love and all the color from the rainbow from Norway.You are welcom to read and comments some of mine poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/26/2012 4:25:00 PM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jenni. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

    Dreese Avatar Jenni Dreese
    Date: 2/27/2012 9:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Carol! Please tell others to read and comment on my writing as well, I crave all types of feeddback, again thanks :) -Jenni Katherine