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Everybody keeps telling me that ill be just fine

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Everybody keeps telling me that ill be just fine

It saddens me to know this is the way I felt at 19 yrs old..

Everybody keeps telling me ill be just fine
But they aint tellling me when
I can't sit here and pretend
That I don't have a broken heart and there's nothing to mend
Night after night prayer after prayer I always send
Hold my head at the same time it feels so heavy
Wanna be happy but its like the Lord won't let me
Forgive me father I know I have sinned thank you for my blessings 
May I ask you one more thing?

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  1. Date: 12/5/2012 4:16:00 PM
    you all have no idea what your feedback means to me thank you so much! xxxo my poet loves

  1. Date: 12/3/2012 1:17:00 PM
    An open heart that's shown here..beautifully expressed!!

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 5:55:00 PM
    You have found an outlet to write out your heart and soul. Both are filled with beauty and love. You will sour high in any direction you go. Hugs Michael

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 2:00:00 PM
    Wow, you are so correct when you say our style of writing is similar. This is beautiful and sad, you are a great writer!

  1. Date: 12/2/2012 12:00:00 PM
    Heartache is the hardest the mending is the hardest ..heartfelt beautifully written,emotional love and light blessings