Evermore

Time marks everything No matter how brightly it is that We dream ~ Swept away amid its hands Crystal glass in crystal sands... Gravitations ferris wheel, turning As seconds of moments smile their last And no one knows but whom can know Like rain that gently washes all away Leaning towards the skies which gaze To breathe this light in that which fades... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ...“Evermore” *

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Terry L. Allen

Date: 5/10/2012 8:49:00 PM

This almost reminds me of the opening statements of the soap opera the guiding light. I wish I could recall it word for word no but I can't. I think it went a bit like this. life passes like grains of sand slipping through the hour glass as life marches forward with the hands of time. I know that isn't it but something like it. TLee

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/6/2012 5:08:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one ..I especially like the line "And no one knows but whom can know"..Yes, no one knows except God what the next minute holds..Thanks for stopping by,,Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 4/23/2012 11:54:00 AM

clever piece