Even To This Day

even to this day,i can still hear your voice,
your beautiful sweet voice,racing threw this place,
even to this days i remember who you are,
it kills me inside,knowing your gone so far,
i repeat our conversations and that only makes me cry,
some times it makes me laugh,you were always so silly,
even to this day i keep the heart you gave me,it still new full of feeling,
it still contains the date we created this love,
you left so much in my life,foot steps with a memorie behind it,
And here i am,still beating my self up,i close my eyes and 
.make sure i dont breath,
i really need a friend,oh thats right you never have time,not
even for me,
even to this day, i carry more than what i ever gave,
that is acully wrong,i gave more than what this words 
will ever make you strong,
i remember i promise you the moon the sky the stars,
well here i am holding the moon like a ring,
pulling the sky like ballons,
and having the stars together like flowers,
even to this day i remember who you are,
and like the promis i made,
ill creat a world with just you and me,just us,
even to this day i cry myself to sleep,
than i tell myself im all alone,
loenlyness became my best friend,
even to this day,i wish i could go back,
and say something to does silent phone calls we had,
even to this day,this end makes me sad.
it makes me fear,not just pain but also tears.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/17/2014 6:11:00 PM
Wow. That was beautiful Guillermo. Hay...can I just call you Gill or something short? Lol.
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Alexis Bennett
Date: 1/17/2014 6:16:00 PM
Ok. I'll find a good nickname for you. Lol
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Guillermo Soto
Date: 1/17/2014 6:12:00 PM
Hehe sure or just call me junior
Date: 10/27/2013 10:07:00 AM
Hello Guillermo, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = Linda
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Guillermo Soto
Date: 10/27/2013 5:06:00 PM
Thank you ! :)
Date: 10/27/2013 1:33:00 AM
Guillermo, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT
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Guillermo Soto
Date: 10/27/2013 5:07:00 PM
Thanks it means a lot :)
Date: 10/16/2013 3:40:00 AM
I have felt these sentiments before with somebody-this is probably why I like this poem so much. A very heartfelt composition! I enjoyed! Always, Laura
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Date: 10/15/2013 8:56:00 PM
wow---deep. Guillermo, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/15/2013 4:47:00 AM
Guillermo, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/15/2013 1:32:00 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Guillermo! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/15/2013 12:12:00 AM
Very passionate and moving poem. A great start on the site. Welcome to Poetry Soup
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