Euphoria

At sunrise, whispering winds start to die Tranquility, lends itself to foment Fragrance of wild lavender, drifts by The loons circle a large effervescent Diving for prey, I observe their splendor I take aim and cast with all eloquence Hopeful serendipity is in store My vessel wafting, absolute silence Dulcet hits, amounts to a tug of war Reeling, I break into a lilting *bliss

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2010 2:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's Beautiful Words Contest Mitch. Love, Carol

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/18/2010 9:07:00 PM

Congratulations on being in the winners circle in Andrea's first contest. Blessings, Connie

Date: 4/18/2010 10:17:00 AM

Nice use of imagery for a peaceful feeling poem. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/18/2010 8:08:00 AM

Congrats Mitch on your winning poem in Andrea's contest.. an amazing write and use of her beautiful words...luv.. "Sweetheart"

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/18/2010 7:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2010 1:21:00 AM

Hey, I just knew it had to be a guy who wrote this one.haha. And I am so glad I got you in my top ten, Mitch. It is really weird to do the contest and then see at the very end whose poems you have chosen. Congratulations. YOu did great with the words. LUv, Andrea

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/17/2010 6:08:00 AM

perfection! Mitch! jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/16/2010 7:15:00 PM

Am going to check out the "flower" Mitch and thankxxx for your special comments on my two wins too... high school? I'll never tell... haha.. going to find my "flower"..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/16/2010 7:15:00 PM

Perhaps I'll be in Euphoria after I see it!

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/16/2010 9:21:00 AM

This is a beauty! You really work these words, Mitch.Great job! A winner for sure, hands down....good luck in the contest...though I doubt that you'll need it...Peace, Audrey

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/14/2010 12:08:00 PM

Good lick in the contest. You are a good writer with a different flow. I mean nothing bad by that. P.D.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/12/2010 4:24:00 PM

I Loved the way you used Andrea's words..excellent indeed,wonderful to read..Charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/12/2010 3:58:00 PM

Great work that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/12/2010 12:00:00 PM

Enjoyed reading today Mitch. Love, Carol

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 4/12/2010 10:42:00 AM

very nice good luck in the contest and thank you for your kind comments faleshia

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/12/2010 6:57:00 AM

The reader can see the birds circling and diving, Mitch. As a fisherman I enjoyed your topic and the *eloquent way in which you expressed the event. Great work! Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/12/2010 6:33:00 AM

You've described euphoria pretty well here ,Mitch :) Perfect title to your engaging poem :) I wish you the ebst in Andrea's contest! :)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/12/2010 6:30:00 AM

different take on the contest!! good write!! Thanks for the comments!!

Lori Phipps

Date: 4/11/2010 2:32:00 PM

I'm really enjoying reading your work. It is fabulous! I see this as a winner. Thank you for guiding me to this site also, I had been searching for an outlet for my own 'work,' and now I have one, thanks to you.- Lori Jean

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/11/2010 8:04:00 AM

WOW Mitch this is awesome...excellent use of Andrea's words and she will be thrilled at this entry..good luck and get ready for a trip to the winners circle..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/11/2010 7:43:00 AM

This is a beauty, Mitch!! Perhaps inspired after a beautiful day in Bidwell Park? :) Lovely poem, and should do so well in the contest! ~ Love, Carrie

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 4/11/2010 7:15:00 AM

Good luck in the contest with the wonderful write, I enjoyed it. Caryl