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eternally beautiful

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eternally beautiful

speaking from
the soul
in ways 
that touch
feelings sweetly 
eternal bliss
deep within

words draw passion
burning hot desire
softly you hold
within your hands
emotions of
the heart

under the skin
cotton soft
gentle lips
fluttering kisses
deep inside
it's you love

igniting sparks
burning desires
who makes 
life complete
love it's you
from now
until the sands
of time
run out

we walk
soul to soul
two hearts together
in eternity
within you
i found paradise

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  1. Date: 11/24/2013 1:54:00 PM
    Liam This is so endearing and loving. I can feel the emotion pouring out of your heart and soul. The devotion and sentiment is expressed in a caring way. Nice job

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 2:53:00 PM
    A beautifully expressed piece of poetry, that was written straight from the heart. Wonderful, wonderful work, my friend! I enjoyed it very much!

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 8:36:00 AM
    hi there, partner in poetry...this is a stand-out, lovingly expressed...:) huggs

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 6:33:00 AM
    - A pleasure to read this beautiful poem, Liam - Wish you a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 5:47:00 AM
    Beautifully done old pal. Loved it !

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 5:54:00 PM
    such a beautifully penned sensual write... a love that's flows from within a heart through the soul is the most wonderful of this poem....simply gorgeous :)

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 3:27:00 PM
    Every bit of this poem is super sweet and beautiful lIam, but I loved that last stanza. it made my heart glow. thanks for the read...Peter

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 1:59:00 PM
    With you i found paradise-this line gives so much serenity to the soul..And to.have and love someone till the sands of time..that s a huge but beautiful promise.Very beautiful Liam.

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 1:11:00 PM
    Another gem.... :) She is fortunate to inspire you to write so beautifully, Liam....

    mcdaid Avatar liam mcdaid
    Date: 11/3/2013 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    if only its a dream gem soul i see wishing in faraway stars that dazzles