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Eternally Alive

golden tendrils light the way, glisten against the gate open wide, out pour the angels, into the galaxy, speeding along on celestial tide, search for souls, some coming alive, search for souls, recently died those coming alive, confused, cry, remember no past, trapped in new life, unsure the future, how long it will last, comes an angel to watch over and protect, to remain and comfort until last breath, then to guide a worthy soul into the loving light of eternal life those recently died, conscience stricken, scream with fear, have no past, trapped in everlasting night, an angel, long departed, returns to give testimonial, of one, who cared more for life, than the warmth and comfort of the light, will now guide an unworthy soul, into eternal blackness and never ending night golden tendrils light the way, the gate, gently sways, then closes all the way, the angels return into the realm of God's eye, souls eternally alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/10/2010 2:26:00 PM
Just wanted to say 'hi" Mac and hope u are having a great weekend... thankxxx again for your help with the photos thing....I will master it .. promise..with luv..
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Date: 7/9/2010 8:53:00 AM
SOUP MAIL..IMPORTANT..luv..
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Date: 7/6/2010 7:34:00 PM
enjoyed reading today, hopeful write, our angels put in our care, for our hearts and enjoyment in this life...
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Date: 7/2/2010 4:37:00 PM
What a lovely poem Mac. I hope this is for the contest....indeed a beautiful entry! :) Love, Carrie
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