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Eternal Love Flame

I sometimes watch you, when you're asleep, then take a deep breath, and this I think........     A year has passed, forever more, life with you, I cherish and adore. Before I met you, it was only a dream, my green eyed girl, may never be.   I'm trying to think, of something to say, that describes my love, an eternal way. This I know, and will always be true, neither breathless sunset nor enchanting words, can ever be, as beautiful as you.   My desire for you, is so loving and deep, my heart and soul, is yours to keep. When I wake up, I think of you, before I sleep, I do then too.   I hope this poem, shows what I sometimes can't say, how lucky I am to be with you, day by day. To close this rhyme, from me to you, I'll love you forever, eternity too

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Date: 2/10/2012 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature Ryan. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2012 7:15:00 PM
congrats Ryan on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful words to share luv.. waiting for u to judge your animal contest luv.. read your update..
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Date: 2/6/2012 11:46:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup this week.................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 9/4/2011 4:57:00 PM
Ryan! This is beautiful! I'm in love with the ending. Michelle...xo
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Date: 8/19/2011 6:09:00 PM
Just beautiful Ryan, a tender romantic verse with so much emotion. I really enjoyed.
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