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Below is the poem entitled ETERNAL LOVE which was written by poet Yamuna Ramesh. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Lying on her shoulder holding her hand I felt to sob......

but I hold it back or she would worry for I was worrying for unknown reason to her......

Though she was unaware I was feeling content for the sea of care she shower on me  forever.....

-------------inspired from a journey with my mom.

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  1. Date: 5/25/2013 11:19:00 AM
    Yamuna, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 8:18:00 AM
    very beautiful lines.

  1. Date: 5/16/2013 10:36:00 PM
    a reality .... fab lines