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Eternal Love

Holding on to that which brings me down Idealogy with logic that maybe I can turn it around How low must I crash before I've hit the end Stubborn, hearted fool, don't believe in your friends Cling to the false lies/ the ones you hold so dear You can carry this load so there's nothing to fear BUT.....what if, for a change, you could share your load And have peace like no other, something you could never behold. Give in to his love for his mercy will suffice There is no love greater than one of sacrifice So no matter the hearache, give it to the Lord For he can help like no other/ whether your rich or poor Seasons will come and seasons will go But there is always a saying that you should learn to know The Lord will giveth and he will take away But his love for you will forever remain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/20/2011 2:29:00 PM
a very beautiful piece of lovely poetry.
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Date: 5/20/2011 1:02:00 PM
awesome, and beautifully penned! I agree completely! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Caroline.
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Date: 5/20/2011 1:03:00 AM
What a beautiful Pen, heartfelt, I like this :)
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Dawn Mclaughlin
Date: 5/22/2011 3:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for the woderful comment on my poetry :@)

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