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hoarfrost coats the grass etching it like acid on a metal plate defeating the morning glories *10/20/12

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Date: 11/10/2012 5:49:00 PM
Hello Lady, , :-) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Enjoyed reading the poem you entered in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest. Always & Forever * PD
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Date: 11/9/2012 1:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Debbie, I love to see a hoar frost xx
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Date: 11/8/2012 3:42:00 PM
Wonderful write,Debbie.Congratulations on your win ....Kudos to you.....
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Date: 11/8/2012 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Joann's "Gogyoka" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2012 9:41:00 PM
This is beautiful. Many congrats for this win Deb.
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Date: 11/7/2012 5:15:00 PM
congratulations.
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Date: 11/7/2012 4:06:00 PM
marvelous one, Debs, well deserved win!
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Date: 10/23/2012 5:50:00 PM
Soon and very soon it will be here..It is in the upper fourties now at night..I thought that I had read this one before but I guess I had not..Creative and expressive work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 10/22/2012 9:26:00 AM
SOUL MAIL, DEB!
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Date: 10/21/2012 7:53:00 PM
This is another awesome poem of yours I've read today my dear great poet friend, Deb. All the best and luck always! hugs:) LG
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Date: 10/21/2012 8:55:00 AM
Sensational, Debbie. I'd say more but it's all in the poem. love, Kathy
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Date: 10/21/2012 5:52:00 AM
It shining of your beautiful poems also Debbie. Winter is too long and cold ..... Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/21/2012 4:47:00 AM
yes indeed Debbie, any resistance from the late bloomers, usually fall at the first frost.. love the way you have constructed this wonderful little verse.. love the Title also...
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Date: 10/20/2012 9:45:00 PM
I hate that frost...it attacks all my flowers and leave them weeping...Thanks for reading and comments made. Really enjoy your writes. One love. Joy wells
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Date: 10/20/2012 6:34:00 PM
cold season,chilly write Debbie lol
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