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5 short minutes is not enough to write a verse and make it sound pleasing to the ear, I've found! A little free verse will have to do,..... held together with some glue! For Russell's contest, I will rush but with Russell's small allotted time I can't find the words to rhyme Oh, look I did it!! ..see those words? Time and Rhyme they turned out good! Please don't say this is absurd! my dilemma is that clock ticking tocking.....time is up Gotta go now.......wish me luck!! _____ What??? you say I have a chance to give my poem another glance and add a word or add a phrase and maybe set this poem ablaze to earn a smidge of Russell's praise?? I'll light my muse with fire-crackers! Blow the words right off the paper! He will gasp! Then, I will ask! "Russell dear, please tell me here... if I've passed this test at last!!??" ____________________________________________
By Carrie Richards Original poem....."Russell's 5 mintues are up!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/6/2013 4:26:00 PM
thank you for the comment on my old poem again. that was nice of you. ***!!! Tex
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Date: 6/19/2013 1:09:00 PM
Carrie, CONGRATULATIONS in Russell's contest.... Luv~ SKAT
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Date: 6/19/2013 7:51:00 AM
Clever and entertaining. Congratulations Carrie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/19/2013 2:26:00 AM
Carrie what a clever finish to your poem. A fantastic write, congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/18/2013 1:10:00 PM
Hahaha...I like the way you have done it!I did not write that 5 minute poem.How to write a poem for this contest now!
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Date: 6/18/2013 12:46:00 AM
hahaha, you rocked it. I didn't even do mine because it was already finished but I think you were clever to add to yours this way!!
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Date: 6/17/2013 10:50:00 PM
One word wow......ease with which you have written this reflects Shiraz :)
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