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Essence Between the Sun and Moon

The light rays of sun Colliding with the dark moon Softly caressing Bending light through empty space Bringing essence between both Then those rays share vibes With the leaves of the tall trees Bouncing colors down Just for us to see the moon And the majestic sun’s heart
Russell Sivey Entrant into nette onclaud's "SEXY!" contest 2/1/2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/12/2012 2:09:00 AM
RUSSELL,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
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Date: 2/10/2012 10:49:00 PM
thrilled to the bones, russell... congrats on your win in my contest!:) huggs
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Date: 2/10/2012 4:26:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest, I like the idea of the sun and moon sharing vibes, two cosmic, sensual tankas! :-)
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Date: 2/10/2012 12:07:00 PM
Very creative. Nice write. Congrats on your win in nette's contest.
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Date: 2/10/2012 11:46:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Sexy" contest Russell. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2012 11:45:00 AM
Congrats Russell On your win.Very nice Tanka by you.Enjoyed.
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Date: 2/10/2012 8:50:00 AM
congrats Russell on another exciting win for this eloquent submission .. so sultry luv..
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Date: 2/10/2012 7:58:00 AM
Congratulations Russell xx
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Date: 2/1/2012 9:15:00 PM
Russell, firstly... how do you get the black bold letters... secondly... nice! nice! and nice!... My 7 year old daughter drew a piture of the sun and moon..lol.. colliding.. i asked her what where they doing... and she said..fighting in the most beautiful way... love your entry for Nette's contest.. good luck in the contest,..pd
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Date: 2/1/2012 9:12:00 PM
Very descriptive double tanka Russell.
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