Escaping Clouds Illusionary Images

Escaping

Thoughts, feelings, desires, life and lust for love,
escaping the confines of  the heart. soul, consciousness
of this old spirit that wants to hang on so
- no desire, no inclination to let it all go
even though the last breaths of hope
seep out of the lungs of love –
but knows, it is all lost on the winds of indifference.

Indifference, she seems to be soaring on
to new plateaus, to higher planes
of expectations – to be met – by ?

This heart becoming an alone orphan
among the crowds of lovers – coalescing,
bringing to, giving to, sharing each to the other.

B. J. “A” 2
October 5th 2008

Clouds
Illusionary Images

A black cloud, hangs heavy over head – casting shadows.
Clouds, permeating blue skies – images of, coalesce,
from the multitudes of representations – imagined.
A cloud that often rained down blue tears
- tears that are drowning all the hope and desires.

Solar winds, blowing cosmic dust, tearing at this heart
 ripping apart the clouds, dissipating their essence,
leaving particles, specks of, to drift apart, become invisible.
This naked eye, the minds eye, never saw a rainbow
reflected in tear drops that hung off this pot of Gold.
The story told, – nothingness ? – her world so cold.
  
B. J. “A” 2
October 5th 2008

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Date: 5/6/2013 4:12:00 AM
Hi would you like to have your poem on VIDAWAR poetry blog, I will put your name or which ever name you wished to be called underneath, my blog is new but I have recently had interest from advertisers and publishers etc, It will be an app and also available for free on AMAZON kindle so it will be sure to gain popularity, you could also have a link on there to something to do with you. Regards VIDAWAR
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Date: 5/6/2013 11:22:00 AM
Hello Vida War : If you think my stuff is worthy of putting on your blog poetry, of taking a new avenue into the realm poetry readers, then by all means, please do so. You may put my name, as shown, under my poems ( B. J. “A” 2 ) and under that ( Wm. J. Atfield Jr. ). My gmail address is as follows ( bja2mgmenter@gmail.com ) so that you may inform me as to how “ app, ”, “ AMAZON ” and your site “ VIDAWAR ” will be reachable ?, for I am computer illiterate ! Lots of luck with your venture . Sincerely B. J. “A” 2 ( Wm, J, Atfield Jr. )
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