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Escape the Baldness

This is so random....O_O
But gimmee a break--its two in the morning. 

Upon dark cloaks billowing in the wind, 
We come across Death in all matters of sin,
 Kidnapped in a magic white truck,
 Driven into the night,
 Can’t escape the baldness and the fright!
Drag our hearts to the land we long to see,
Make the best for you…and mostly me,
 Chords that lick the life outah me
I'd only wish that we were free and full, 
Far away from the shiny bald skull....
Life’s exiting shrill in the silent lull…
Of tomorrow

Copyright © Laura Breidenthal

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  1. Date: 11/4/2012 9:15:00 AM
    I really liked this, great job especially for two in the morning! lol

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 1:28:00 AM
    A really interesting piece which made me smile as our mindsets open new doors at silly oclock...i love that it was not totally apparent when i first read this piece that it was a death skull...great description skills tyvm karen

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 9:08:00 PM
    hehehehehe... The things we come up with hahaha xD But it's sooooo muuuuch fuuuuuuuuuuuun haha always, Becca

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 7:49:00 AM
    creepy! I have an irrational fear of being kidnapped, so this hits close to home! yikes!

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 8:05:00 PM
    Interesting thoughts come at 2 am. It is always good to wrtie them down and sort out later. Thanks for sharing.