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Below is the poem entitled Escape which was written by poet Patricia Lewis. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Can anyone tell me if I can 
escape from the temporal lobe 
in my head?
For the memories that I have 
collected through out the years 
keep replaying over and over 
For when they play it's as 
though they are happening 
right then and there. 
Can time speed up to either 
dismantle the hippocampus so 
the past events that causes 
pain won't be recalled. 
Can time speed up so the 
hippocampus can trigger the 
Alzheimer's can start to take 
I'll just depend upon the frontal 
lobe to recall relevant 
information and pleasant 
experiences that has taken 
place. Can anyone tell me?

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 4:31:00 PM
    Good work, nice job. Lynn

  1. Date: 9/20/2012 8:41:00 PM
    wow.. nice words

    Lewis Avatar Patricia Lewis
    Date: 9/20/2012 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thats! I never wrote a poem like this before as you can see. I wasn't too sure if the wording was too strong to get my point across. Thanks for the comment! Simmplissity =Patricia