Escapade

Hush now darling
But don’t dare to close your eyes
Our bodies are crossing
Your hips between my thighs
Our thoughts crystallize

Free your minds expressions
Feel the things you see
Motivate this session
With your wildest fantasy
Think and let it be

Let our love be our genie
We are each others wings
Our love’s magic like Houdini
On a carpet ride we sing
How our love forever rings

Hush now darling
Tonight will be the key
Look to the starling
Let imagination lead,
And hormones free

~*Miranda*~
**Contest by Francine Roberts; Make me Swoon, but read the contest**
Quantain (English)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 3/17/2011 3:08:00 PM
Miranda, this one got me all hot and bothered! lol. I suddenly feel 16 again! nice work and Happy St. Patty's Day O'Lambert JS O'Lambert ?
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Date: 3/16/2011 9:44:00 PM
wow!! what a place to get away to,, sure enjoyed,,, good luck in the contest,,, free falling of feelings,,, take care,..p.d.
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Date: 3/16/2011 3:41:00 PM
So much love and passion in this poem, Miranda. I definitely swooned while reading it and I'm sure Francine will as well. I do think opening your contest up to limericks will result in more entries coming sooner. I encouraged Diane and George to try limericks as well and really enjoyed reading theirs. It's always nice when judges let contestants know their entries have been received. Sometimes, they have been known to just disappear from contests. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/16/2011 6:29:00 AM
Thanks sweetheart, my anniversary weekend inspired this one, happy to hear that you can relate...:-)
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Date: 3/15/2011 5:44:00 PM
WOW Miranda this is awesome.. unique.. passiionate.. full of the flavor of luv..Francine will be swooning as I am .. reminds me of me and my hubby sweetie... good luck as this is so enchanting luv..
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