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Escapade

Hush now darling But don’t dare to close your eyes Our bodies are crossing Your hips between my thighs Our thoughts crystallize Free your minds expressions Feel the things you see Motivate this session With your wildest fantasy Think and let it be Let our love be our genie We are each others wings Our love’s magic like Houdini On a carpet ride we sing How our love forever rings Hush now darling Tonight will be the key Look to the starling Let imagination lead, And hormones free ~*Miranda*~ **Contest by Francine Roberts; Make me Swoon, but read the contest** Quantain (English)

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 3/17/2011 3:08:00 PM

Miranda, this one got me all hot and bothered! lol. I suddenly feel 16 again! nice work and Happy St. Patty's Day O'Lambert JS O'Lambert ?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2011 9:44:00 PM

wow!! what a place to get away to,, sure enjoyed,,, good luck in the contest,,, free falling of feelings,,, take care,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/16/2011 3:41:00 PM

So much love and passion in this poem, Miranda. I definitely swooned while reading it and I'm sure Francine will as well. I do think opening your contest up to limericks will result in more entries coming sooner. I encouraged Diane and George to try limericks as well and really enjoyed reading theirs. It's always nice when judges let contestants know their entries have been received. Sometimes, they have been known to just disappear from contests. Love, Carolyn

Wandering Butterfly

Date: 3/16/2011 6:29:00 AM

Thanks sweetheart, my anniversary weekend inspired this one, happy to hear that you can relate...:-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/15/2011 5:44:00 PM

WOW Miranda this is awesome.. unique.. passiionate.. full of the flavor of luv..Francine will be swooning as I am .. reminds me of me and my hubby sweetie... good luck as this is so enchanting luv..